tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post4792358414877681423..comments2023-10-21T04:20:56.387-07:00Comments on Flowers of Sulfur: AmberUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-69407125318023588652010-02-13T13:59:31.786-08:002010-02-13T13:59:31.786-08:00Very nice, Francis. There is a real feeling of ent...Very nice, Francis. There is a real feeling of entrapment in this. These lines make me think of those little Victorian amber necklaces that encase petrified insects"<br /><br /> "an aural complaint<br />punctuated with amber<br />clots, ensnaring the flippant<br />and the shifty"<br /><br />Wonderful.Megan Duffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17365057175235149862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-14941835723420727442010-02-13T04:10:28.637-08:002010-02-13T04:10:28.637-08:00"rueful light, having been
kicked from his un..."rueful light, having been<br />kicked from his unclean-too"<br /><br />I love the attitude and edge of the poem and the feeling I got of an opaque structure around a nucleus which slowly winds up to the reader.Anders Enochssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05971413442536196199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-83710085933925862022010-02-12T10:30:40.810-08:002010-02-12T10:30:40.810-08:00Many exciting images, like:
"the bully-
brui...Many exciting images, like:<br /><br />"the bully-<br />bruised sky"<br /><br />and<br /><br />"punctuated with amber<br />clots, ensnaring the flippant"<br /><br />Beautiful with an edge.Jenny https://www.blogger.com/profile/17128326064445770505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-39975176586616029752010-02-12T06:20:53.955-08:002010-02-12T06:20:53.955-08:00I really like this, it cannot be read without pass...I really like this, it cannot be read without passion. And the last verse folds onto itself wonderfully.The Scrybehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11804216068536725136noreply@blogger.com