tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post6007995564920507600..comments2023-10-21T04:20:56.387-07:00Comments on Flowers of Sulfur: 1972Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-14379143017537658242010-07-14T14:58:36.642-07:002010-07-14T14:58:36.642-07:00thank you, all
Thomas: one of the greatest compli...thank you, all<br /><br />Thomas: one of the greatest compliments a poet can get is when someone has printed out their work and read it aloud. Thank you.Megan Duffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17365057175235149862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-54270310838719173492010-07-10T15:45:29.098-07:002010-07-10T15:45:29.098-07:00Megan,
This truly captures a moment in time......a...Megan,<br />This truly captures a moment in time......and a happier time!<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-87963406346909011252010-07-10T04:54:18.581-07:002010-07-10T04:54:18.581-07:00The second last stanza is the business! I printed ...The second last stanza is the business! I printed this out and read it loudly and it is so percussive. Although in my accent I am sure it loses the "New York" impact. Anyways Megan, really love it this work.Thomas Sheridanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01666150454652215104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-85863809368260707832010-07-10T04:35:07.229-07:002010-07-10T04:35:07.229-07:00Wow, Megan. The narrative really captured my atten...Wow, Megan. The narrative really captured my attention. The spirit of the ablum and era mentioned echoes through the lines. <br /><br />I just love<br /><br />"Ashes gather in her lap, then fly as the fan's neck/makes its rickety journey from the far corner of the room" <br /><br />and the last stanza.Jenny https://www.blogger.com/profile/17128326064445770505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-57469656124443814512010-07-10T00:45:23.127-07:002010-07-10T00:45:23.127-07:00This one is flowing; thick strokes creates a strik...This one is flowing; thick strokes creates a striking "another" reality.Anders Enochssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05971413442536196199noreply@blogger.com