tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post603024318772656421..comments2023-10-21T04:20:56.387-07:00Comments on Flowers of Sulfur: StonesUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-86264643279587150812010-01-15T11:21:48.795-08:002010-01-15T11:21:48.795-08:00an enigma. I like how you write elasticallyan enigma. I like how you write elasticallyAnders Enochssonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05971413442536196199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-64879152996493328722010-01-15T08:52:23.399-08:002010-01-15T08:52:23.399-08:00brilliant stanzas which made me a happy ol’ mule f...brilliant stanzas which made me a happy ol’ mule for an hour or more. good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-73554377183301054052010-01-15T08:51:37.009-08:002010-01-15T08:51:37.009-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-48945766355053878552010-01-14T12:49:51.575-08:002010-01-14T12:49:51.575-08:00Very enjoyable - Light and self depreciating - I d...Very enjoyable - Light and self depreciating - I did miss any reference to Sisyphus though :DGarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15637097897454660933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-91928294687312457362010-01-14T01:21:53.770-08:002010-01-14T01:21:53.770-08:00I like the humorous simmering undertones a lot. In...I like the humorous simmering undertones a lot. In this poem "gravity" becomes elastic, I think. The twist towards the ending is really good too.Jenny https://www.blogger.com/profile/17128326064445770505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-5644540603630782452010-01-13T21:47:23.333-08:002010-01-13T21:47:23.333-08:00Thanks PO & Akeith. I'm glad you like the ...Thanks PO & Akeith. I'm glad you like the new banner and the poem. I did try to switch up my style a little bit with this one.Francis Scudellarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01008685302028451297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-88885013773788602442010-01-13T20:35:52.327-08:002010-01-13T20:35:52.327-08:00Great layout to the new look. I wondered who had c...Great layout to the new look. I wondered who had created it.<br /><br />This poem is great, by the way. I think the ending is great. Do I detect subtle sarcasm?Akeith Waltershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07901655384498253421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6552865727572221967.post-79389597001041240422010-01-13T12:31:59.859-08:002010-01-13T12:31:59.859-08:00I love this stanza:
"That's what I tell ...I love this stanza:<br /><br />"That's what I tell most, but I couldn't / tell you any details about twelve labors, / monsters taken, torn asunder" and the last two lines!<br /><br />The blog layout is so awesome! I saw in a comment that you have created it. I recognized your style too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com