Too long spent treading water,
head bobbing up and down
between passing ships
and an array of distorted
messages in bottles
It was here that I realised the time to let go
and sink down into the depths of you
had arrived
But fear,
night terrors,
a gang of them,
their voices calling out like whale song
beneath the surface
Try as I might I cannot shake the feeling
that this shade is not a ghost at all
Rather a permanent stain,
the spreading of ink
across an otherwise pale blue
canvas
And it always arrives with the taste of decay
that dull screw
of a fragile hobgoblin
so pensive and grave
7 comments:
This is very good.
interesting poem...gave me a sad, drowning feeling.
I kind of liked the drowning images....always had a vast terror of deep water with big ships too close. At the end of the poem was the 'dull screw' that always ends these horror-fantasies...chop, chop. Thanks for the poem, Scrybe.
PG
new follower, and this is one of my favourites so far....
I love the image of the ink spreading across the canvas. The feeling conveyed is so much more tactile than any ghost.
Thanks for the all the comments :D
Great writing, I have enjoyed reading through your blog.
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