i think i'd like to read this a hundred timesi've read lots of poems about rain, ocean and shore beforebut the way timmy brings them together in his rimesmakes you feel them more and... evermore:)
Honest and visionary. I really like this poem.
I agree with Ande and human being, this is visionary and the rhythm and sentiment are wonderfully fused.
Oh, I have devoted a large part of my life trying to find just that melody, I think.
This sings beautifully!
Your poem makes that melody a reality for the rest of us :)
thanks to all for the positive comments - i really appreciate them. hope you are all well.
timmy,I really liked this poem very much. I was carried to that peaceful place.Beautiful.Eileen
Love this timmy. The simplicity of truth can be so hard to render.
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