 i think i'd like to go far away where no one has gone before over the farthest mountains along an empty shore and walk along forever but never round the bend where the ocean meets the river the river that never ends and stop beneath a shady tree to listen to the rain that plays on the leaves a melody that will never be heard again  |
Sunday, May 16, 2010
shore
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
9 comments:
i think i'd like to read this a hundred times
i've read lots of poems about rain, ocean and shore before
but the way timmy brings them together in his rimes
makes you feel them more and... evermore
:)
Honest and visionary. I really like this poem.
I agree with Ande and human being, this is visionary and the rhythm and sentiment are wonderfully fused.
Oh, I have devoted a large part of my life trying to find just that melody, I think.
This sings beautifully!
Your poem makes that melody a reality for the rest of us :)
thanks to all for the positive comments - i
really appreciate them. hope you are all well.
timmy,
I really liked this poem very much. I was carried to that peaceful place.
Beautiful.
Eileen
Love this timmy. The simplicity of truth can be so hard to render.
Post a Comment