I love the mysteriousness here. Great poem. A stupid question perhaps, is this the poem with tomatoes?
Again, concise words that seem to be smoldering.
I like the atmosphere of this a lot. Darkness and contemplation.
@ PO Johnson: Thank you, I'm glad you like. And yes tomatoes are to be found there ;)@ Jenny Enochsson: :) Thanks@ Megan Duffy: I like that it created an atmosphere for you, thanks for the comment :)
This one hints at a lot beyond what's written. The word "undertakings" combined with the odd number of shoelaces, especially sends my mind reeling in strange directions. Nicely done.
Many thanks :)
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I love the mysteriousness here. Great poem.
A stupid question perhaps, is this the poem with tomatoes?
Again, concise words that seem to be smoldering.
I like the atmosphere of this a lot. Darkness and contemplation.
@ PO Johnson: Thank you, I'm glad you like. And yes tomatoes are to be found there ;)
@ Jenny Enochsson: :) Thanks
@ Megan Duffy: I like that it created an atmosphere for you, thanks for the comment :)
This one hints at a lot beyond what's written. The word "undertakings" combined with the odd number of shoelaces, especially sends my mind reeling in strange directions. Nicely done.
Many thanks :)
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