Talia lit
a candied wick,
her annual try
to melt away
the cherry-glazed
sadness,
but having
no taste for cake
and no fondness
for pie, she drips pink-
blue stings on her
waiting
palm, its cracks
brimming with waxy
rivers, to set
a striped and flamed
believing, where
as when
the tremors
go out, she'll wish
for tears to rise
and curled smoke to close
the black eyes of
heaven
— Francis Scudellari
3 comments:
This one has a unobtrusive feel about it, which is still powerful.
This is my favorite:
"she drips pink-
blue stings on her
waiting
palm, its cracks
brimming with waxy
rivers, to set
a striped and flamed"
Stunning lines!
My favorite line:
"...curled smoke to close
the black eyes of
heaven"
Beautiful image. Great writing.
Such a furtive pathos in this poem. Fantastic rhythm achieved. "To close the black eyes of heaven" is one of those phrases you ought to be able to build a retirement on. Beautifully done.
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