Brilliant writing here.
Menacing, very efficient writing and as last full of dread.
I like the structure a lot. You have a real talent for writing dialogs that are both thrilling and natural. I am sure you would be a very good theater- and screenplay writer (perhaps you already do that). But anyways, your poems and short stories are great as well!
akeith, ande and jenny thank you all very much.jenny, i have never tried writing either plays or screenplays - and don't plan to any time soon. i have thought of trying to do animations - but so far the thought of the time and work involved have daunted me.thanks again! p s this poem - the wanderer - was printed in a little magazine in england around 1991. the pictures are new.
Timmy, this also made me think of a micro-play. I just love the end:"...icylights. suddenblast of airgoodbye."Wonderfully original, as always.
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