Monday, April 5, 2010

b(l)ind...

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nuit
ou
jour
tu es
invisible
comme le vent
mais
je t'écoute


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8 comments:

human being said...

Jenny...

perhaps it was too soon for me to be 'featured'...

but i use this opportunity to thank you for everything...
you are a gem!

Obsidian Eagle (ItzQuauhtli) said...

Bref mais exquis!

Merci pour la poésie.


;)

Jenny Enochsson said...

hb, thank.

There is one small exception to the radomness. Poets who have written more than three poems have been made "featured poets" before the ones who have written less than three. Then newer members have the chance to add more texts in the meantime, if they like.

All prolific FoS poets have already been featured poets by now (except me and my husband Ande, but you know, that would feel like nepotism). :) So it felt like it was your turn now, as you had posted more than three pieces.

Anyways, everybody who contributes here deserves to be featured poet of the month (at least)!

Jenny Enochsson said...

Here I was babbling about radomness and forgot to talk about your poem, hb... Sorry.

Ah, this new piece has such a sublime quality to it. The (l) makes the "blindness" relative, which I believe it is. Lovely one.

Thanks for your contribution here.

PO Johnson said...

C'était un magnifique poème. J'aime le beau message. Excusez mon mauvais français ;)

Francis Scudellari said...

Very elegant and affecting.

Momo Luna said...

Un poème marveilleux! Is that the right word for beautiful and serene.... I can hear you in every silence. :-)

human being said...

my dearest Jenny...

the new look of the blog is rightly chosen and absolutely becoming and beautiful...

if you see this work invisible, that's just because i wanted it so... it has nothing to do with the changes you applied...

my first intention was so... to cover the poem... as the title suggested... b(l)ind... but at that time i could not find any color to match the background of the blog... that beige color was the nearest choice... and i just left it to be so...

this morning i noticed the new post and i visited the blog and when i noticed the background is white, i changed the beige to white...

and in this way what i intended was fulfilled...
:D

i have some other works which are completely or partially invisible... depending upon the theme and the image or mood i wanted to create...
this is another one if you are interested:

http://dearteachercrow.blogspot.com/2010/01/tombe-la-neige.html


much love