love this noxy! it is cool! 'not so by age as such born—bred, yet still wet gilled '
I get the impression of life crawled from the muck and ready to evolve, and I like the snaking rhyme.
Nice, and welcome to the crew :)
Welcome, noxy! I liked this poem. Nice to have you here.
This has the gleaming, infinite quality of something just being born. Welcome.
as i was reading this i could feel the life force traveling trough my veins... usually unnoticed...beautiful!
This is so beautiful. I re-read this over and over just to get back the feeling when reading the poem.
stanis,Francis,The Scrybe,Jenny,Megan,human being,and PO Johnsonthank you for your warm welcomeand also for the kind words.noxy.
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