mysterious mounds tingle to
an affectionate touch
(extra long fingers)
dead-end double d expressway
to my devotional moat
(lemon flavored lube)
hesitant sentences
best said with scent
(incense cult)
the fluid spirit rushes to
the stickiest end
(pinecone love)
i tend to interpret the nuances
of others without words
(just give up)
is it a mirage?
a leisurely anarchy?
(run)
11 comments:
Now that's what I'd call a sensual poem.
"dead-end double d expressway
to my devotional moat"
Superb.
This one has so much attitude, altitude, arrangement; essentially: raw force.
what you have done with the visual form... different sizes of font and parentheses... is fabulous!
perhpas it's what is called art!
;)
Whoof! I all red in the ears. This poem is gorgeous. I really like it. I also really, really like 'hesitant sentences/best said with scent', a lot. I drop a link to one of my own which relates (but is not nearly so daring or sense-intensive at all, i intellectualize sex in a ridiculous manner in fact): here is other poem with pinecones and sex
Thank you for this stunning read. It rules. You should get paid for this by a fancy publication.
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francis ~ you got that right!
jenny ~ :)
ande ~ thank-you for "raw force" that makes it sound even better
human being ~ i love to mix up the type font and size...perhaps it is art...
old 333 ~ the poem is very flattered that you called it "gorgeous"
~ i read your poem and it was great, thanks for including the link
hey NIKKI... that last sentence i wrote was an answer to the question asked in the poem... always think love is an art:
http://dearteachercrow.blogspot.com/2010/03/non-linear-equation-with-three-unknown.html
:)
and found your attitude here so artistic...
sorry if there was some ambiguity...
best
So much elemental energy to this one. Excellent.
Great words and images Nikki, I love your multitalented world of art and writing!
human being ~ i just arrange words like i compose a piece of artwork, i usually just piece together what sounds/looks good, there is hardly ever any point or meaning to my stuff because i want the reader/viewer to make it their own, have their own thoughts and feelings...
~ i like how you respond to art!
thomas ~ thanks!
charles ~ as always...thanks for the words of encouragement:)
"they say love is not a matter of head it's a matter of heart
but i found it to be a matter of art" ~ human being
these words of yours are so lovely and insightful!!!!
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