Lorelei,
I hear a whisper
on your breath
And the void
you left behind
is forever untying
all
my
ribbons
Down below
the confusion
is impossible to deny
But up here
reflection
is the only perspective
Dressing down,
a lesser sense of self
Faceless and hiding,
social constructs cast aside
Pressing the mortal mass together
Words uttered
from two lips twice denied
And
how can the sun dare to shine
when you are not here?
7 comments:
hope the sun keeps shining for u & 'he' does turn up!
Keep writing as u are doing- with feeling!
I was tempted to sing along with this... but I don't have much of a voice :). I'm particularly fond of the second and penultimate stanzas.
Yes, I read this poem like a song. A fine poem.
You would put some nice guitar chords to this no problem.
I have always found your work musical. Nice piece, again, Scrybe!
ahhh... those beautiful ribbons of yours... so resonating...
missing is a void that sings... that's why it stings... like this beautiful work...
Thanks for all the comments :))
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