Tuesday, March 16, 2010

a high potency remedy...


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grinding the gregarious gluttony of a guilty gibbon into
girdling gravels of a giving glimmer

d i s s o l v i n g

or perhaps
fffffffllllllloooooooaaaaaaatttttttiiiiiiinnnnnnnggggggg
in the medium
of the murmuring moments

one of a hunderd

diluting the delusion
succussing the singing whole

one of a hundred

diluting the illusion
succussing the sorely serene role

one of a hundred

diluting the fusion
succussing the succumbed senses of a soul

diluting as deep as you are ready to dig
and succussing as high as you want to fly
from the coat into the core

passing through the gate of avogadro's limit
visiting the vintage of an invisible essence

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14 comments:

human being said...

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Limpidus said...

I had never heard of the word succussing so guess what? you taught me a new word today.

and aah the alliteration! super!
I could not understand the poem since i got stuck at the gibbon's image but scatter-ism is really cool!

PO Johnson said...

This is excellent! You are good. I floated around in the poem, feeling at home so to speak.

Gerry Boyd said...

Amazingly awesome alliteration as an antecedent.

Jenny Enochsson said...

Cool. I am amazed by your ability to make your words fly, sail, float. The crow seems to be near the lines, as a trickster. Wonderful!

Francis Scudellari said...

This makes me want to dilute deep and succuss high, to get to that core :). You capture the essence beautifully.

Megan Duffy said...

lovely sound and sweep.

human being said...

thanks a lot my dear friends for leaving your reflections and your encouraging words... they mean a lot to me... every one of them...


not bad to mention that this post was inspired by the way a homeopathic remedy is prepared...




may you always be in flight with the essence!

Ande said...

I really like visuals; a flowing poem.

human being said...

thanks Ande...
everything escapes me... that's why i like flowing...

:)

Tom said...

This is brilliant. I love this poem.

human being said...

thanks a lot Tom... for reading and leaving this encouraging comment... means a lot to me...

Claude Limoges said...

I would LOVE to see this performed. It's still dancing in my head.

human being said...

Claude...
your words filled me with content and joy... as i feel i've been able to illustrate a bit of that cosmic dance... the only dance there is...

thanks
and

much love