My fingers felt so light at the dawn
They could weave a thousand dresses,
on a thousand little rotating hips
Eternity’s threshold refused
to open up to me
the garden of earthly delights
So my freehand prose crept
and crawled up the wall,
like so much leafy ivy
9 comments:
a sublime compensation for an unsatisfied yearning... poetry... art!
...giving soul (ivy) the power to transpass inhibitions (wall)...
images... so lush and lively...
beauuuuutiful!
'freehand prose' was a wow!
you captured
morning
on its cusp
of beauty.
I enjoyed reading that this morning. Thanks!
Elegantly created. An effortless musical flow throughout the whole poem. Nice twirling feeling.
Hey there all, thank you so much for your comments :)
Very lovely images.
I like this one very much. I can see and feel and live in it.
Fun to read your work!
Thanks for visiting my site.
Dianne
Beautiful. Really, very exquisite.
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