Wednesday, March 3, 2010

s u b l i m a t i o n . . .

.

a heavely hell
burns
in me

the imprisoned volatile elements of the cosmos
erupt
on the skin of my futuristic past presence
blooming into
the yellow flowers of sulfur
flawless and soulful
never flowing through the tunnel of time and place

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11 comments:

human being said...

thanks my dear friend, Jenny for inviting me to this beautiful site...

this one is for you
and your flowers of sulfur



hi everybody...
soon the crow perches on the branches of the tree of your words... to crow!

:)

PURPLE STAINED SKIN said...

I REALLY LOVED THE FLOW OF THIS.

Megan Duffy said...

"blooming into
the yellow flowers of sulfur
flawless and soulful"

such a pleasing meshing of sounds in the mouth and air.

The Scrybe said...

Hello again, dear Crow. Welcome to the family...

Jenny Enochsson said...

Very welcome, Crow!

What a wonderful poem and it even contains flowers os sulfur! Powerful. It is so great to have you here.

Obsidian Eagle (ItzQuauhtli) said...

Sounds like you hit the nail smack dab on the head with this one. Sort of just stumbled here myself but I am awed by the resident talent.

Cheers!

- ItzQuauhtli, Herald of Quetzalcoatl

Ande said...

Exquisite, and full of rounded dimensions. Thanks.

timmy said...

great to see you here, hb.

Francis Scudellari said...

It's lovely to have so many of my favorite poets in one place :). Welcome crow, I hope you'll caw and flap here frequently.

PO Johnson said...

Welcome, its so great to have you here. Another fine poet in the FOS collective :)

human being said...

wow! such warm and encouraging words from a group of beautiful souls... and great poets... a family indeed!

thanks dear friends for inviting and accepting me among you...
sorry i don't answer you one by one... surely you know about the speed of internet in Iran and the restrictions... i prefer to spend my limited access on visiting your posts here or your sites... to discover new worlds... to know you better... to love you more...

namaste!