Wednesday, March 31, 2010

the seven states of matter...

please read from the bottom line...
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..................................................................................your
..................................................................always in...........thoughts


.........................................................................you
...............................................you... no one but


..................................................................you
.......................................the fire burning in


.....................................................you
..............................in each breath..........take


...............................................you
..................flowing... engulfing


........................................you
................far... far... from


................................you
........alone... without

i am


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6 comments:

human being said...

this is an old post from my blog in a format a bit different from this one
http://dearteachercrow.blogspot.com/2009/02/seven-states-of-matter.html


but it is in line with what i want to say here in 'sulfur project'...

the same search for that essence...



and really we have seven states of matter... not three...
:)

Jenny Enochsson said...

Wonderful visual poem and she/he/it is rainbow (the poem, I mean). I like how your writing rattles my head, in a good way.

Jenny Enochsson said...

a rainbow, I meant

Ande said...

The pillars of wisdom is a rainbow to me now. I like them better as dye.

Francis Scudellari said...

It's essential to find that essence :). Your poem makes us experience all seven states simultaneously.

Jon Parsons said...

roygbiv...

and james joyce would love this post

almost as much as me!

:)