please read from the bottom line...
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..................................................................................your
..................................................................always in...........thoughts
.........................................................................you
...............................................you... no one but
..................................................................you
.......................................the fire burning in
.....................................................you
..............................in each breath..........take
...............................................you
..................flowing... engulfing
........................................you
................far... far... from
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........alone... without
i am
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6 comments:
this is an old post from my blog in a format a bit different from this one
http://dearteachercrow.blogspot.com/2009/02/seven-states-of-matter.html
but it is in line with what i want to say here in 'sulfur project'...
the same search for that essence...
and really we have seven states of matter... not three...
:)
Wonderful visual poem and she/he/it is rainbow (the poem, I mean). I like how your writing rattles my head, in a good way.
a rainbow, I meant
The pillars of wisdom is a rainbow to me now. I like them better as dye.
It's essential to find that essence :). Your poem makes us experience all seven states simultaneously.
roygbiv...
and james joyce would love this post
almost as much as me!
:)
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