Disenchanted, this slanted floor
whispers to me
through its tightly clenched slats.
Cranky tales of failed
first steps, I tip-toe past,
unflappable. End tables mock
my walk-by dare,
mouthing weak-coffee moans
from wood-grained circlets. Stains
surface, I sidle on,
as their knots fade. A lean-to shade,
the lamp tilts up
shadows with blunted beaks.
Clipped wings flapping deep-toned
airs, my unsettling makes
falsetto. Vents hiss librettos
to dissuade me
with their combed-over notes.
Forced-upon causes, pause
to caress fleeing ought,
envied. Wood shutters crack mutters
to trick a gaze
from pictured window's bliss.
Vagrant clouds cross crowds
of stars, my straying's wish.
— Francis Scudellari
4 comments:
What a powerful poem, filled with such smooth transitioning images.
agreed. highly literate yet flowing. much to love here. "Vents .... notes" resonants. Like the quirky line breaks too. yum yum.
Thanks guys. I struggled over this one for a few days, as it started out with a whole different narrative.
Hi Francis,
Fine flow (as usual).
I am very fond of these line:
"mouthing weak-coffee moans/from wood-grained circlets. Stains"
I keep reading them again and again.
Thanks.
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